Translation edited. Bumping for comments.

Albert: Do notes resize properly with the new image resolutions, or did sea shuffle them around on accident?

I think you killed Nanoha's voice and turned one sentence broken over two speech bubbles into two sentences. Akuma isn't a continuation of koitsu, it's an aside, or even unsaid.

The new image scaling thing breaks everything. Until it's fixed, fit the notes on the original size, not the scaled version.

I see your point with 悪魔 not being part of the voiced sentence. As for note scaling, they seem to match up with the resized version of the pic atm. I think I originally made them with the full resolution on screen for easier reading.

Looking at post #206113 shows that notes aren't scaled until after you view the original image once and then resize. Unfortunately the quality of the image is compromised at that point compared to the initial viewing.