Sure hope we got this right...

Looks good to me, but try to position your notes as closely around the text as possible. It looks a lot nicer.

just wondering what the little dialogue was in the background. Plus this is quite funny haha

You did a pretty good job, except for the part where you completely made up the translation.

Nice found hope u upload more of them in future. Dun mind ask u where i can get this doujin by crazy clover club intro link pls.