Yes, I can't. So, please stay by my side forever. (I think I have read/seen too much cheap romantic stuff)
Pfft, you call that cheap romantic dialogue?
"Maybe I take pride in being useless, after all, it lets me admire your beauty this closely doesn't it?"
Or...
"For you, I'd forget how to breathe if it meant keeping you by my side a moment longer."
Additionally you could throw in a line about how she leaves you breathless anyway or something like that. I would make up more but... I try to embarrass myself only a few times a day.
"Maybe I take pride in being useless, after all, it lets me admire your beauty this closely doesn't it?"
Or...
"For you, I'd forget how to breathe if it meant keeping you by my side a moment longer."
Additionally you could throw in a line about how she leaves you breathless anyway or something like that. I would make up more but... I try to embarrass myself only a few times a day.
Well, yours is still romantic enough. Mine? Not even close. I just took it straight out from a literal 3-cent-novel so of course it's bad.
