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From the look of things, Ooyodo's about to have a late night "writing up reports".

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The source has an English translation included, so it seemed a bit silly to me that this still hadn't been translated. Granted, the English wasn't exactly good, but it wasn't so bad that you couldn't tell what it was trying to say, at least to me, so I just fixed it up a bit, making the same kind of changes you'd make to an essay that you're proofreading.
However, I don't think I did all that good a job with the CSS on Sendai's proposal (the boxes are way bigger than they need to be) and I'm just not arrogant enough to assume that I did it right when this is my first time doing this, so I'm leaving it tagged with "check translation".
And, because of what's clearly happening here, I'm also adding the yuri and night battle idiot tags.
(just as a sidenote: as a lesbian who's been crushing on Sendai for years, this totally made my day when I first saw it, and it made my day again when I first discovered the English translation)

AntagonistChan said:

The source has an English translation included, so it seemed a bit silly to me that this still hadn't been translated. Granted, the English wasn't exactly good, but it wasn't so bad that you couldn't tell what it was trying to say, at least to me, so I just fixed it up a bit, making the same kind of changes you'd make to an essay that you're proofreading.
However, I don't think I did all that good a job with the CSS on Sendai's proposal (the boxes are way bigger than they need to be) and I'm just not arrogant enough to assume that I did it right when this is my first time doing this, so I'm leaving it tagged with "check translation".
And, because of what's clearly happening here, I'm also adding the yuri and night battle idiot tags.
(just as a sidenote: as a lesbian who's been crushing on Sendai for years, this totally made my day when I first saw it, and it made my day again when I first discovered the English translation)

I have to say, you interpreted some more difficult parts very smartly. Kudos for not making me pull my hair out with this one.

And I never thought I would need to pull out ruby text on a Chinese translation. Had to look that up just for this, and I hope it checks out.