I really love how everything is modestly shaded in with pencil instead of completely filled in with black.
It really adds a lot to the yellow-orange motif.

Kanji! We're losing him, doc!

...And then Naoto has her revenge on Rise with one sentence.

kanji has died due to blood loss lol
i love the style, who made this?

I'd love to see Yukiko dress Chie up in slightly less tomboy clothes. Not that I don't like Chie how she is - she's awesome, bike shorts and all - just think it'd be interesting.

I like how Rise looks in the bottom when she finds out that Naoto's chest is bigger than hers like in the video game.LOL.