Whoever finishes might want to check the top right bubble. "Aaaanshite" Seems like making the noise "Aaaan" for opening wide, made as a verb, so I just put it as "Open wide~". Fix it if you think there's a better way to put it, I couldn't think of one.

I'm pretty sure that's fine. What bothers me is the right-hand and middle columns in that bubble being treated as separate phrases.

why you do this to suwako? also i dont get it? either thats brown stuff is either crap, its actually frog meat, or she's not hungry.

jasokun said:
also i dont get it? either thats brown stuff is either crap, its actually frog meat, or she's not hungry.

Eating when you have overeaten isn't
exactly the most plesant thing ever.

Neither is the next hour after you stop either

censored tag? what is censored?

Artist's commentary:

Title: I’m sure this is how Gobaku arashi ended up later
Related to Kujira rooran's Comiket77 Report. (post #743414)
Just so that there are no misunderstandings, let me say that I'm not angry at all about being left out.
Actually, I'm happy that I was given such a noticeable role in his manga.
All I was doing was just joking around a little bit with Gobaku-san.