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alice margatroid, shinki, yumeko, mai, yuki, and 2 more (touhou and 2 more) drawn by juth_(ptns5253)

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    パーティーの後

    写真を撮るのは靈異伝のエリス
    実は最近マイクラに中毒されたから絵はよく描けなかったけど…少し前に描いた絵。

    友達が書いてくれたストーリ：
    みんながアリスの誕生日のために映画を見に来た
    アリスと夢子は中に寝てしまった
    アリスは誕生日の記念に前夜に遅く寝たから、そして夢子は誕生日パーティーの準備をしながら
    神綺とサラは楽しく見たけどルイズはユキとマイと一緒にR-15映画を見えなかったのがちょっと怒った

    Story written by a friend:

    Alice and Yumeko fell asleep during the film.
    Alice because she stayed up late the night before because she asked to be able to stay up past midnight for her birthday, and Yumeko because she spent the night preparing for the birthday party.
    Shinki really enjoyed the movie, Sara thought it was nice, Louise is pissed she didn't get to go watch the R rated movie that Yuki and Mai went to and had to watch the kids movie instead.

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    I’m not sure how to handle these either, but the English version omits some parts from the original. To allow for the Japanese text to be fully translated, I moved it and the original English text to the Original section. If it gets a proper translation, it may be possible to use headings to distinguish between our translation and the artist’s translation.

    Normally, these would be tagged with bilingual commentary, but since some information is omitted, it might be better not to use it since it may reduce the chance of it getting properly translated.

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